Think clearly about the questions you needs and ensure that you get the maximum you can from your feedback.
Questionnaire by Sahar
Feedback
MV
WWW
complete edit
lip-syncing and narrative
clear decisions about construction, choices of shots and edit
EBI
some lip-syncing 'out' on youtube draft
pace of edit - too slow
variety of images - seems very limited and perhaps a missed opportunity
opening especially slow
narrative is NOT clear - perhaps you don't want it to be - both narrative in countryside and reversed footage in the house
Overall, I think you have slightly under-shot what you need to make the most of this. The links between lyrics and image as not as strong as they might be and the overall effect while perfectly acceptable is not at the highest level.
Digipak and Advert
2 possible adverts - NO DIGIPAK
Please ensure that the digipak is uploaded asap
Adverts
www
some evidence of research coming through
some use of conventions - reviews, star ratings etc.
clear connection with MV through choice of image and suitable to genre
ebi
think about institutional details, logos and icons
how are adverts and posters used interactively?
how will digipak tie in with advert?
BLOG
some evidence of work completed, research, planning and production
far from complete and clearly some have more evidence than others
ensuring that this is updated and completed asap is vital
FEEDBACK FOR SECOND EDIT
By Melina
Well done to Melina, who has submitted a great deal of work and appears from this blog to be doing it entirely on her own. I'm sure this isn't the case BUT so far neither Nicole or Sahar have submitted work to the blog and on the basis of this their work grade assessments will be accordingly low.
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ReplyDeleteWell done to Nicole for submitting but I don't seen anything here or on your personal blogs which tells me that Melina and Sahar have completed and submitted the essay which was due on Monday.
Nicole-
ReplyDeleteDigipak drafts have all been uploaded.
Digipak feedback will be completed by Thursday.
Digipak will tie in with the advert though the typography, font colour and grey-scale images.
I will also assess any areas where I can improve the quantity of my contribution to the group blog.
Sahar-
ReplyDeleteI have had trouble uploading my work onto the blog, therefore I am in the process now, and I am trying to put in the same amount of work as I did last year. I have also done research of my own to make sure I'm giving my all to bump up my grade. Also i intend to comment on each of the uploaded pieces of work, because although it isn't evident- we have all had an input in everything, may it have been discussion or finalising any of the pieces of work. If i comment on each one, my input will be evident and my grade won't be as low as it seems hopefully. :)
Feedback.
ReplyDeleteWell done Melina. You are consistently producing work at a high standard and this will support a high grade. With respect to your evaluations, you must aim to be concise as well as comprehensive.
Nicole, I realise that you have had some technical difficulties but you have worked through these and you should continue to do so as we move forward. There are still some holes in the research and planning stages and you should ensure that you upload all the relevant documents to support your claim for a high level.
Sahar. There is a significant way to go with this and it is crucial to demonstrate that you have completed the relevant tasks to support your grade. Currently, I do not see evidence of your involvement to warrant level 3 or above and this is worrying at this stage BUT not unfixable. It is down to you to improve this and soon across the board. research and planning, evidence of involvement in products and evaluations.
Walk the line
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You need a research page which is separate from pre-production/planning
Organisation of work
All contributing
Pre-production
Sahar - make-up/costume, animatic x 2, company logo
Melina - lyrics, artist information, animatic x 2, casting, equipment, audience mood board, EP mood board, photo shoot ideas, logo, APP idea
Nicole - MV synopsis, digipak research, EP research
Mostly good evidence of research mixed in with some pre-production and some other ideas.
Melina - level 3/4
Sahar - level 2/3
Nicole - level 3
Production
This is where I am expecting to see the MV and a series of drafts with some commentary on the journey.
Can you move the pre-production work onto the appropriate page.
Nicole - locations, risk assessment,
MV - Level 4
Ancillaries
Advert - Melina - various versions - needs some commentary on the changes. Level 4
Digipak - Nicole - excellent sense of development through the drafts with appropriate commentary included - better still if all in a SCRIBD doc. Level 4
Evaluations
Melina - questions 1-3
Nicole and Sahar - none
all 12 evaluations should be completed by the deadline.
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